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who are youlit candles in the daylight;
curtains closed, eyes closed
i dream.

of last winter and of cold hands
of sand between our toes and slipping through the hourglass
of you and i.

sometimes i wish our hands would touch once more
and your familiar gaze would reach mine again.

but your eyes are cold like last winter
and the hourglass has reached the end
of you and i.

burning wax at 3:26 pm;
curtains closed, eyes closed
i dream.

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Submitted: March 7, 2010
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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS 50D
Shutter Speed:1/1328 second
Aperture:F/1.8
Focal Length:50 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Mar 7, 2010, 3:45:38 PM

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Critique by ~LaszloNemeth Mar 7, 2010, 11:51:57 PM

This is an awesome picture. At first I want to say a beautiful Model you got there. Here style works to the background and these colours, awesome.
You need to think about, fix the contrast in here face. I think you got a bit to much contrast there or if you change the curves, light or contrast in Photoshop change the blending mode of the setup layer to luminanz so u only change the light setup not the colours. if u wont do that you got on the skin this brown noised areas. Your background is really pretty and u had quiet a good aim at this shot.
The position of here looks really easy but it works. A great aspect is the light in this picture like a glamour glow effect in Photoshop only better. I hope this critique would help you. That was a nice try and now I could start happy in the day with this inspiration. Have a nice day, greets.

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~Catissy Aug 12, 2011 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

i love it serious

=meganbreukelman Aug 12, 2011 Professional Photographer

_{thank you so much.}

~Tuttanne May 7, 2011 Student Traditional Artist

This is a beautiful photo

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=meganbreukelman May 7, 2011 Professional Photographer

thanks!

~creative8 Mar 9, 2010

Nice Shot, expressive, quite simple, but I like due to the simplicity

=meganbreukelman Mar 9, 2010 Professional Photographer

thank you.

~creative8 Mar 9, 2010

your welcome

!RapSoldier Mar 8, 2010

nice photo

nice body

~22spoons Mar 8, 2010 Professional Artisan Crafter

Don't stop Rockin'

Nice schene and moment!

=meganbreukelman Mar 8, 2010 Professional Photographer

thanks! :)

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